Corner Pub #3 |
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There is Peace Within |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
There is Peace Within |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Truly beautiful and such exhibition of dignity in death. Love, joyce |
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Pantheress Member
since 2008-11-02
Posts 215Queensland, Australia |
That's so beautiful.. Thank you.. |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dinah: What a moving and beautiful poem! I'm glad I got to read it. Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
Oh i enjoyed that very much.Actually made me want to cry.To find such comfort in the end. I think we all wish for that.. Very good write Suzanne |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I felt I was there right with you. Brings back so many memories for me of my own discovery up the West Coast with members from the Squamish Band here. It was truly a life-changing experience for me, and therefore, trickled down to my family. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
I appreciate you all taking the time to read me...thank you Dinah |
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Hope Fleeting Member
since 2009-02-23
Posts 52Smalltown, Somewhere |
I love the way you catch both the dignity and compassion of a tribal life. Very touching. ~ Previously Known as Broken_Winged_Angel and BrokenWinged_Angel~ |
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turtle Senior Member
since 2009-01-23
Posts 548Harbor |
This is a lovely poem Spirit. As a whole I like it very much, but I think S2 needs just a tiny bit more "show" turtle ![]() |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Thank you both for reading. I am content with it, does not need 'any more show' in my opinion. This is the way I wanted it to be, and this is the way I wrote it...but thanks anyway, even though I object to critiquing, giving it or receiving it. Dinah |
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Quiet Waters Junior Member
since 2009-03-13
Posts 15IN, USA |
Quiet dignity in Death. It is the way of Native American culture, not just at the end but throughout their lives and so beautifully captured with your words in this piece Spirit. Thank you for sharing your words with us ~ In just two days, tomorrow will be yesterday! |
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