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Open Poetry #40
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jak
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since 2007-03-14
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Charlotte, NC
0 posted 2007-03-27 06:18 PM

Dead pasty moonlight
Was calming to her
As she walked
Through a traveling trail

Tightening her gate
She slowed to a wary
As she swallowed
A garden so pale

Forging firm poise
She flattened her spine
As she shored
Dim air into veil

A blanket of dawn
Boar a confident fawn
As she shed
A shadow so frail

Jak
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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2007-03-27 06:21 PM

ah, you described the shadow well, you did

beautiful write here
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2007-03-27 07:24 PM

Very very nicely done jak!
Much enjoyed.

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.
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