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Open Poetry #40

Nations of one

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2007-03-29 02:18 PM

      The Introvert!

Alone, here AM I, all alone!
within the precincts
of this dark, silent room,
an ‘adventurer’ upon
tempest-tossed seas
   of thought,
a deserted island
in endless time....
crying out with
voice like the wind
through lost caverns
    of emptiness,
the echoes return
to mock their inventor.
Shadows close in about me,
I face them all,  alone!

TerryW
Senior Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA

1 posted 2007-03-29 02:22 PM

Beautiful ... but remember you are not completely alone -- you have your muse to guide you!

Terry

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

ArtSolstice
Member

since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

2 posted 2007-03-29 04:34 PM

"crying out with
voice like the wind
through lost caverns
of emptiness,
the echoes return"

I can really feel that chilling isolation.
Very "Caledonia noir".

But you're not alone here, Bruce.

[This message has been edited by ArtSolstice (03-29-2007 05:17 PM).]

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