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After Noon |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. A gate on a hill By the lake near the tracks Off Old Ridge Road A water tower With the town’s name painted on The hot dog cart old war monument A concrete bridge Angels Castles made of clouds Perhaps just how it is A passing train’s Extended wail Slowly flying in watchful gyres Two hawks above the trees . |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
sounds great |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
stood still scanned the hill Do the people on the train, see the same scene? very picturesque. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
you have a knack for stimulating the ordinary...excellent write... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this sounds like a place that once was here in my town love this! |
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