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Open Poetry #40
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DennisTheMenace
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since 2005-09-04
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0 posted 2007-04-01 05:24 PM


Where’s my eraser to remove this mistake,
Give me an opportunity to do a remake,
Turn those letters back to what should be
Remove the ik and let the ov surround the l e
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Margherita
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1 posted 2007-04-01 06:20 PM

Very lovely!

There is always a chance to get the message through ...

Love,
Margherita
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2 posted 2007-04-02 08:47 AM

wow! I love this!
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