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Kamo No Chomei
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Kamo No Chomei |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. One star The moon A yet lit Christmas tree Across the road In their glow The winter night Is still and dark And yet so deeply blue In a distance Far from here The strident sounds Of a captious dog— I love My life . |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Beautiful slice of life! Nicely done John. |
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Devious Intellectual Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 112 |
very simple not ust to reading stuff liek this one but it was different and i like the simplicity |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
John... I like this!! RDB |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
simple abundance - we should appreciate as he did. Chris  Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know of this...except the dog is right next door |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
My dog is next door too...but he knows that I like quiet...James |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Thank you all This came as a result of my reading and at the same thing struggling with whether or not I should attend an actual poetry society meeting. In the end this said I had nothing to gain by going. Thanks again. John |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
no way to read out if you should go to a poetry meeting or not. Did I mention PM? that is all the trouble came from. No, you shall not go. a beautiful silent night. [This message has been edited by Drauntz (04-25-2007 12:17 PM).] |
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