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Open Poetry #40
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
0 posted 2007-05-06 06:43 PM

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Do you really imagine
Someone will love you more
To that same degree the less you are
To be seen

Well young girl
I do not know
Still however much
You try to disappear

You’ll still
Be there


.
© Copyright 2007 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
1 posted 2007-05-06 07:12 PM

So well said.
So well written.
You reached into my head
and spoke words I did not know how to say.

A
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
2 posted 2007-05-06 09:01 PM

as beautiful as before. weighed a little more.

heart is targeted or still is bothered by the crossing of the old squirrel's eyes.

enjoyed as always.
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