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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
0 posted 2007-05-08 07:31 PM

Two Angels


Me and my sweetheart
are both angels.

We belong together.
We know that.

We also know
that pride
comes before
a fall,
and we
don't want
to be
fallen angels.

So we try
with all of
our hearts
to do
our best,
and to God
we leave
the rest.

JamesLee
07May
2007
© Copyright 2007 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
1 posted 2007-05-08 09:48 PM

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Good Jim

John


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Drauntz
Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
2 posted 2007-05-08 10:14 PM

beautiful poem of love, and romantic again

value prices everything to its ultimate beauty.

enjoyed.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2007-05-09 06:47 PM

Thank you John and Drauntz for the nice responses...James
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