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Wild Geese |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Sun and moon In late afternoon Still on either side Of a pale blue sky Autumn leaves In red and gold reflections The water ripples As it passes Under a wooden bridge There are deer in pairs Grazing in fields Beside the forest— Young squirrels leap From tree to tree Acorns falling Break Echo’s silence In the distance Snowy hills . |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautiful |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
...yes...beautiful John hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
John... simply b e a u t i f u l !!! thank you ! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Nice imagery. Well done. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a scene that is! |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thank you This was an instant intended without ostensible comment in summation which then to my mind allows each their own interpretation of what is being said. Thanks again John |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
A lovely scene it truly is. |
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