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Loving You
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Loving You |
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tatalinia Member
since 2005-12-17
Posts 137CA, US 
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My heart aches for you your name is engraved in me when trying to escape you my mind ceases not to pull away and Iam falling deeper and deeper I cannot erase these things What we did, what we shared I have not yet learned to push forward My body is moving but my mind is on hold I do not write these things to lure you back I just write them to let you know What I feel for you is real And running will only do me harm So I have accepted this pain of loving you and will continue to push on I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
very romantic. Song of love. beautiful. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
Powerful writing. I liked this a lot. |
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