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Open Poetry #40
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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0 posted 2007-05-18 10:18 PM

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October dusk—

and we two of course
must  go away


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© Copyright 2007 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
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1 posted 2007-05-18 10:40 PM

April first down--

and you two of course
will come back

HA ha ha  I got you!!!!

enjoyed your poem

Wish you have a very good night and a wonderful weekend,  sir Pawlik

[This message has been edited by Drauntz (05-19-2007 12:27 AM).]
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