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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. As sea laps the shore Tell her she is beautiful— And she shyly smiles . |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Lovely. A |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
it is quite a duel to "she is". or because I just read it. How beautifully come together. as to prais a harbor as a beautiful lady or a lday as a beautiful harbor. Beautiful things go together naturally. enjoyed. I shall make up a Haiku for this one just for the poetic fun. it is a very beautiful Haiku again, truly. enjoyed. May you have a nice day, Sir Pawlik. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
beautiful |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
for humorous only As dog licks the bone Tell him he is tasteful And he loudly screams "so we write to illuminate ourselves, |
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