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No Need to Please
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No Need to Please |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I don’t need to please you Anymore I used to, you know But now I’ll just do it this way And you Can just sit back and watch Because I don’t need to please you Anymore -- Alison |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms az..I like the message, and the poem |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
James Thank you Alison ---- DS You know what I mean. Thank you. A |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
I could really relate to this. Thankyou. It is so true. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
oh, sad. sad is how I feel. enjoyed. |
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Robert Jordan Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392Philadelphia Pa USA |
Aziza, This is a very well structured poem. That's very good. Bobby |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
love it Alison! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
yes, I agree... well said! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you all I never find tapping into one's strength and independence sad. A |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
effective 'write'! Applause!! |
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