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Open Poetry #40
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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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0 posted 2007-06-05 03:52 PM


Love You

I suppose
that I should
say thank you
for all the times
you thrilled me
out of my mind
and I will
for the rest
of my life...
love you.

JamesLee
05June
2007
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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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1 posted 2007-06-06 01:16 AM

good one. short but beautiful.

enjoyed as always
aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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2 posted 2007-06-08 01:53 AM

James

This is lovely
but it reads like
a sad goodbye

I hope it isn't.

Alison
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2007-06-08 06:12 AM

Thank you Drauntz and aziza for the nice responses...
Aziza I hope it isn't also...James
passing shadows
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4 posted 2007-06-08 03:42 PM

awww gosh
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