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Open Poetry #40
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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2007-06-11 08:25 PM

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In summer meadows—

A nest of sparrows
With open mouths


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© Copyright 2007 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
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1 posted 2007-06-11 10:30 PM

love this poem. it makes me laugh. Those kind of pictures always touch  mothers hearts.

beautiful.
passing shadows
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2 posted 2007-06-12 05:07 AM

nice
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3 posted 2007-06-12 11:49 PM

enjoyed this
Martie
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4 posted 2007-06-12 11:50 PM

Hi John...I'm trying to learn how to do these and make them sound so...perfect.  
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