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Tossing out the Old (Emotions)
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Tossing out the Old (Emotions) |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Tossing out the Old (Emotions) I have been sad enough for two days now So I gather my tears like packets of pearls And cast them into the seas to wash upon the sands Of faraway shores – drifting far from me Deep cries splinter as they cleanse my soul Perhaps its spring cleaning before Solstice Forging space for new thoughts and dreams, a renewal Opening new cleaner windows To view a beautiful world --- Alison |
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MarkG Junior Member
since 2007-06-21
Posts 48California USA |
Tossing out, cleanse, cleaning, renewal, cleaner,to view a beautiful world.....hmmmm sounds like a good idea...i love this poem...it not easy cleaning it up and putting away the past...great metaphor here for going forward and letting go...keep up the really fine writing...tc |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
windows are our best friends enjoyed it ms |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
windows to the soul...cleansed...this is beautiful A. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A poignant twist to a summer solstice poem. Beautifully scribed, sweet poetess. May the summer bring in new perspectives and many new memories in the making! You have such a graceful pen. I always enjoy your poetry. Happy summer hugs, Linda |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I have been sad enough for two days now So I gather my tears like packets of pearls And cast them into the seas to wash upon the sands Of faraway shores – drifting far from me" ohhhhhh yes...  loved this so much! |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
We all need to wipe away the old sometimes, make way for the new. You did a wonderful job with this deeply meaningful poem. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Indeed AMEN! Beautiful! |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
A new beginning.... nice write, enjoyed. |
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lacydee Member
since 2007-06-17
Posts 130Indiana |
very well done. a pleasant read. Dee as for me and my house, we will serve the Lord. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
doing a bit of Spring cleaning I see love it |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you all. Very much. A |
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