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Open Poetry #40

Battle Scars

Fairplay
Member

since 2007-01-15

Posts 222
England

0 posted 2007-06-28 08:27 PM

My Ex she was a Belfast Girl
Where sometimes yes means no
She was the Sweetest Darling
That one could wish to know
I married her with Battle Scars
Still carried (but not on show)

She was the Sweetest Darling
Hardworking and a Saint
There is no other picture
That I could wish to paint
Though I would say her habits
Were sometimes very quaint

I married her with Battle Scars
I carried them with pride
Until the day she left me
Then I broke down and cried
She always smiled so sweetly
Especially when she lied

RogueandPoet
Member

since 2007-06-04

Posts 126
Oregon

1 posted 2007-06-28 09:41 PM

I get his poem completely. Nice!

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

2 posted 2007-06-29 04:53 PM

ahhhh..the definition of blind love...which i have experienced once or twice in my life...some of the moments are worth the outcome.........

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

3 posted 2007-06-29 07:14 PM

Very powerful word play.

Nightingale
Junior Member

since 2007-06-21

Posts 31
Depths of The Unkown, UK

4 posted 2007-06-30 04:00 AM

Hope this to be a story.
hugs to your heart.

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