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Open Poetry #40

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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-07-09 11:01 AM

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Those once
New stars

Young moon
Silver light
Shimmering
On the sea

Fireflies
Their solitary year
Of beauty
Crickets
Among the reeds

Every old willow
Holds a sadness
In its leaves

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Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-07-09 11:57 AM

that is why winter....to refresh the spirit and to drop the old sadness.

nice.

Moonkist
Member

since 2006-09-29

Posts 197
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2007-07-09 12:14 PM

the simplicity of nature's beauty expressed beautifully... even nature weeps...

Freedom Now

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2007-07-10 04:06 PM

I love this... especially the ending! *S* There is much depth in the seemingly simple... Well done!!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2007-07-10 05:47 PM

Every old willow
Holds a sadness
In its leaves

I agree with Suthern~~

M

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

5 posted 2007-07-10 06:56 PM

Thank you all

Mureen, I think you and S especially
know what I was going on about.

Thanks again

John

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