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How can my heart change so fast?
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How can my heart change so fast? |
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jarrett Member
since 2006-05-10
Posts 72Ut, USA |
How can my heart change so fast? How can my heart change so fast? My love for him is now in the past Now when I look at you Everything seems too good to be true I’ve never wanted anything more I’ve never needed anyone to live for I’ve been myself whenever I’m with you I feel like I’m stuck to glue Now that I have someone to impress I go out and buy a new dress I try something new with my long hair For me that’s only too rare You’ve change me for the good Now I do everything I should I love this new feeling inside When was the last time I cried? Is this love or infatuation? Please send me a salutation By Tricia |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
outstanding way of expressing this! Love it! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"You’ve change me for the good Now I do everything I should I love this new feeling inside When was the last time I cried? Is this love or infatuation? Please send me a salutation" An excellent write...most enjoyed.  In the midst of winter, |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I like the last line, the quirkiness in it made me smile although, if I'm buying a new dress and growing my hair long I'd want more than a saluation. a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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jarrett Member
since 2006-05-10
Posts 72Ut, USA |
Thanks for all your comments!! |
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