| Open Poetry #40 |
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Courage |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa
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Confined to a strip between the sea and the mountains of everyday life courage is shelled and moves like a crab as if it is going somewhere. Oh, it blusters and shouts and tries to get out from the folds of a hardened gut but always a sideways movement the definite way to extinction of the perceived unique. Left/right, left/right; how boring is life when courage afraid to swim or climb the mountain of life’s disdain into love’s mystery hanging like a voluptuous cloud in tempt of the scared, afraid. Courage! Yes, yes! It’s the mind of a fool who cares not to leave level ground but one with the courage to forsake all others for the meaningful things in life rises above the imaginings and lands in a beautiful place! Helen / 7 February 2007 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Left/right, left/right; how boring is life when courage afraid to swim or climb the mountain of life’s disdain into love’s mystery hanging like a voluptuous cloud in tempt of the scared, afraid. I agree...but sometimes fear is hard to overcome. ![]() M |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
great work Helen! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Courage! Yes, yes! It’s the mind of a fool ~*~ And yet, Helen... where would the next step come from... enjoyed this very much! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Helen...I hope you are well..I've missed you and your poetry, deeply thought-full. |
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Winter Butterfly Member
since 2007-02-03
Posts 61The hidden path beyond the ivy gate. |
I loved this poem. A wonderful read after a long day. "The only way to learn to fly is to spread your wings and jump." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
another wonderful piece! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh, Helen! I do love this one. It has been so long since I've spent much time here lately but I am going to trying and remedy that. Hope you are well, my friend. *hugs*....jo |
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