»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #40
»
Soft Sin
| Open Poetry #40 |
|
Soft Sin |
|
|
DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
I watch silently And you don’t know I’m here You move gracefully Taking time and using care Drying off slow Towel glides over your softness Places I now know Taught to me in darkness I scare you with a sound Unable to know the beauty I’ve found |
||
| © Copyright 2007 DennisTheMenace - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
brings soft thoughts to mind~~ nicely done M |
||
|
DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
thanx glad to get any comments here specially nice one |
||
|
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Enjoyed the word play, "taught to me in darkness" Exceptional warmth TD |
||
|
DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
thanx not exactly wordplay, my girlfriend is blind (but don't tell her, I'm not sure she knows) |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
precious personally I dry off fast...too cold for hanging out |
||
|
Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh I do like this! well done! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
||
|
Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
A little too voyeuristic for my taste but your writing abilities are certainly there so there you have it. - Ed Head Cheese & Chicken Feet |
||
|
Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
hey that's vouyerism isn't it!!!! LOL  perfectly expressed!!!~~~kingsangel~~~ |
||
SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I think it's incredibly sweet.... |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
