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Open Poetry #40
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howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
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0 posted 2007-02-16 02:22 PM


       i love the way you add up my pieces

i know it's hard trying to smooth out our creases

but keep writing and faster than the speed of "excite" we'll have enough Reeses Pieces

           to create a sweet enough thesis

to meet each other's nieces

                 under better conditions



                                                           love,

                                                           eve
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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1 posted 2007-02-16 08:56 PM

good advice from Eve ... keep writing Howard!   wonderful!  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........
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