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Open Poetry #41

Hurricane

eminor_angel
Member

since 2003-05-22

Posts 323
Canada

0 posted 2007-09-26 04:42 PM

Every night, when these clouds come out
I wait for you to tell me it's over,
To just say it's over
Because your love is a hurricane
and I am no longer
The eye of this storm

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

1 posted 2007-09-26 04:43 PM

nice poem,

"i am not longer the eye of the storm"

nice write

ARCTIC WIND

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2007-09-28 05:04 PM

Nice writing...James

moondogz
Member

since 2007-05-01

Posts 397
Great White North

3 posted 2007-09-28 05:09 PM

Interesting metaphors, I liked it. Yes the safest place during a "hurricane" is at the eye. Well done eminor_angel.

moon.

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