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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. The fallen autumn leaves Collect between the houses There are shoals of orange And red along the streets Waiting for her In the late hours After classes Each time I hear A rustle of October Under the silver moon The heart leaps . |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
How deeply captivating! The association of the rustling of leaves with her coming home ... truly beautiful. Love, Margherita  |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
A fine personal impressionistic/Romantic write! I am especially fond of: "There are shoals of orange And red along the streets" Applause! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very touching and well written, John Ida |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
enjoyed this John... especially the last line! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
This is indeed a very touching poem. I, too, love the last line. The sound of rustle at the night of late October!!!!! How fast a heart rate can match that?! What a wonderful love feeling!!!!  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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