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Open Poetry #41

The moments plight

Bill Shirnberg
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since 2007-10-28

Posts 50
USA AOK

0 posted 2007-11-02 10:21 PM

Some thoughts may wander
in the pale unknown
but most can find
their own way home

"check please"

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2007-11-06 05:20 PM

Interesting!
It is not easy to monitor our thoughts, they dance randomly most of the time in our mind.
But I think we can learn to "range" them somehow, which would be an advantage.

Love,
Margherita

illusiveangel
Member

since 2007-10-22

Posts 72
Liverpool, UK

2 posted 2007-11-08 07:47 PM

I liked this. Uncomplex, direct but also I had that real sense of 'knowing' as I read this.
An interesting piece.

Illusive x

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2007-11-08 07:55 PM

"Some thoughts may wander
in the pale unknown
but most can find
their own way home"

~ but then there are those thoughts that I hope will never find their way home! lol

Curious, cute, and clever!

"check please"

Earth Angel

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