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Receptive Breaths
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Receptive Breaths Gentle sensations relish change ~~When October greets November As leaves drop down no longer drinking O’er winds remorse blushed deeper thinking Passion heightens through the days still tender The thrill upcoming camouflaged under the weather By wool sock blown these thoughts to tether The way has changed its afterglow Portrait perfect yet I know And feel Sinking into something more ideal Cottage creeks and river spirits run Knitted into cashmere hugs all said and done I’m here Still near as only you would know Spinning spent the autumn place or show My heart hears the echo in your mind Dampening the air in pride So let the unleashed winds combined Remove my gloves, in search to find Your hands that know the way of me Not given up so easily My feet remain on solid ground It is warm thoughts I wrap around You Copyright Kkh 11/10/07 |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
So let the unleashed winds combined Remove my gloves, in search to find Your hands that know the way of me Not given up so easily My feet remain on solid ground It is warm thoughts I wrap around You Kathleen, my friend ...a stunning write! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Knitted into cashmere hugs all said and done I’m here Still near as only you would know Spinning spent the autumn place or show My heart hears the echo in your mind Dampening the air in pride Dear TD, you weave such beautiful and deep thoughts into a truly exquisite poem. Love, Margherita  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
MOST BEAUTIFUL KIDDO, VERY MUCH SO. YOU DO HAVE A WAY WITH WORDS |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"As leaves drop down no longer drinking O’er winds remorse blushed deeper thinking" and then? "By wool sock blown these thoughts to tether The way has changed its afterglow" these have such a witchy way about them (and I'm rather fond of such rhythms)  and "cashmere hugs" Trademark lush imagery, Kathleen! I have been away too long. ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD "My feet remain on solid ground It is warm thoughts I wrap around You" Such a wonderful sentiment in this...wrapped in the lush of your always awesome imagery. |
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