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Open Poetry #41
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gwaihir
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since 2007-07-20
Posts 58
Sub-tropical, USA
0 posted 2007-07-26 08:37 PM



See
turquoise
blue ocean
in my mind’s eye
Dream


Hear
Rhythmic
waves lapping
against the shore
Song


Feel
hot sand
sparkling white
in between toes
Joy
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Berenice
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since 2007-07-18
Posts 18
1 posted 2007-07-26 09:07 PM

simply wonderful!
Bronzeage
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since 2007-07-20
Posts 197
2 posted 2007-07-26 09:19 PM

A beautiful piece, GW.
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2007-07-26 09:23 PM

now this is no dream for me...it's only 15 minutes away

and I do enjoy going when I can stand the heat

beautiful write
gwaihir
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since 2007-07-20
Posts 58
Sub-tropical, USA
4 posted 2007-07-27 08:36 PM

Berenice and Bronzeage:  Thanks.  

passing shadows:  Thanks and I am very jealous.  
secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
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a 'Universalist' !
5 posted 2007-07-28 10:39 AM

very pleasant 'read'!

[short, well 'sculpted' and effective!]

applause!!
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