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Open Poetry #41
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openmind
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since 2007-11-05
Posts 12


0 posted 2007-12-12 01:00 AM


I do not yet know her name, but I know she is out there somewhere
If we could only touch hearts, and I could show her I truly care
When I do see her I will know that at that moment she is the one
He smile will be bright and warm like the rays of the sun
I cannot believe it has been so long since I have felt love
I believe she will come to me like a blessing from above
So when we finally kiss, no more will I feel alone
Until I finally find her, I will speak of a love unknown.


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moondogz
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since 2007-05-01
Posts 397
Great White North
1 posted 2007-12-12 01:11 AM


I could feel your yearning for love in the words you spoke...I wish you success in your quest. I have been very blessed to have found my soul mate 40 years ago...I feel that by putting your words to paper you have sent out a call across the universe that will attract yours. Happy trails to you my friend.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2007-12-12 06:02 AM


Nice writing...James
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