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Open Poetry #41

Reflection

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2007-12-16 01:27 AM

I believe what I see,
What I dream to be blue
With curls that drought
The floors plateau,

I believe this person to be me,
To be upon a merchants path,
Only a sculpture standing,
With the words tied
Behind my back,
Like a boy that leans for his fathers grasp.

What am I?
A statue of limitations,
Without a tongue,
Surrendering the whims
Of my sun of words
That con my purest thoughts
So much like I sit
Betrayed by my thoughts.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2007-12-16 09:36 AM

What am I?
A statue of limitations,
Without a tongue,
Surrendering the whims
Of my sun of words
That con my purest thoughts
So much like I sit
Betrayed by my thoughts.

You write well!

Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2007-12-16 09:53 AM

Never seen you poems before, happy I found them

ARCTIC WIND

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2007-12-16 12:16 PM

cool write

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

4 posted 2007-12-17 12:17 PM

Thanks for the support, happy you enjoy Arctic.

Tomer

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

5 posted 2007-12-17 12:32 PM

very good. very good.
love the end.
Tom

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