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Open Poetry #41

THE LAST NOEL

shirtless
Member

since 2006-04-29

Posts 359

0 posted 2007-12-27 04:56 PM

we walk
in the fat snow

her hair
like falling flames

she is pregnant
and dying

we hold hands
as stars fall
into our open mouths

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Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2007-12-28 11:29 AM

I let the hush of snow swallow my emotion over your touching words ...

Love,
Margherita

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

2 posted 2008-01-11 04:14 PM

good

John

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

3 posted 2008-01-11 04:29 PM

indeed beautifully sad.
TM

Clang
Member

since 2005-12-15

Posts 222

4 posted 2008-01-11 05:26 PM

How sad. Good emotion in this one.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2008-01-13 01:47 PM

I was stunned by this and felt so very sad.
Ida

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