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Beyond Our Blue Skys
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Beyond Our Blue Skys |
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tatalinia Member
since 2005-12-17
Posts 137CA, US 
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On earth we make our mistakes Heaven is a place to make up for everything we did wrong To meet again in greeting with forgiveness and love Hugs of understandings that we never would have given while on earth Heaven is a place where we can begin again with a much better approach I long for the day when I will see you again and forgive you for the wrong you caused The heartbreak and pain that caused me to stumble a many times The tears that never dried from my face when I was alone and cold at night I long for the day when race or color will no longer matter Or what religion we worship or the day we attend church I long for the day when mothers and fathers will no longer pressure the son To do something his heart was never in to begin with I long for the day when love is all that matters and not who you share vows with Till that day comes I will just smile and carry on knowing in my heart that I will see you again and offer you my hand again with love For now I let you rest and may God bless you in all that you do With my last look as they lower you in the grave I throw my last flower on your casket Bearing you a goodnight, with love NOTE:The person I have written this poem about did not die, it just feels like that since they are no longer in my life for reasons that are stated above in my writing. I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health [This message has been edited by tatalinia (01-06-2008 11:49 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a fine tender heartfelt goodbye, which reveals that you are a kind, forgiving soul. |
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Clang Member
since 2005-12-15
Posts 222 |
I am sorry for your loss. This is a beautiful piece. |
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