Open Poetry #41 |
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The Pleasures of Luscious Weather |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
The Pleasures of Luscious Weather When I looked into her eyes I liked the way she looked at me. As I kissed her lips her kisses lingered soft and tenderly. Feelings have blossomed to bring us closer together. Hearts in sweet embrace not unlike the pleasures of luscious weather. JamesLee 03August 2007 |
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Krishankins![]()
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Those are the big raindrops on a hot summer day. Refreshing My child's smile tells me there's still hope |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Krishankins for the nice response...James |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
James, you are such a hopeless romantic .. it is beautiful and so heartwarming to read you ![]() ~Sheli By words the mind is winged |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. This almost seems Arabic Very good John . |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
sways lovely on the tongue, James~~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
A romantic metaphor James and a good one! Eric |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
beautifully done James |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
soft and tenderly sighs well done James |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you divine, Huan, belle, ethome and Lee J for the nice responses...James |
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