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Open Poetry #41
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BBGrrl
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since 2007-07-17
Posts 181
BC, Canada
0 posted 2007-08-03 05:41 PM


lady bathes alone
a curve of sweetened cream
adorned golden, curled.
parted lips betray hidden
scorned petals yearn, scent denied

wander wolf prowls
Ronin,-  insatiable
towers, silvered, spare
master in sinew, bone, in lust
eyes burn through thin skin veneer

honeyed growl purrs
parchment from behind the screen
her face, stained crimson
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Bronzeage
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since 2007-07-20
Posts 197
1 posted 2007-08-04 12:08 PM

Very nice BB. I like the combination of tanka and haiku. Is this the start of a series?
BBGrrl
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since 2007-07-17
Posts 181
BC, Canada
2 posted 2007-08-04 07:24 AM

I believe it is, Bronze.
Thanks for the read.
bel1e
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since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631
3 posted 2007-08-04 12:04 PM

ok...my turn to be impressed...this is outstanding~

  

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