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Open Poetry #41

Still In Chicago

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-08-09 07:13 AM

Still In Chicago

Allow me
to remember
our love;
the way we
blended together
like a fine wine.
That sweet embrace
that can never
be erased
in my heart
nor in my mind.

JamesLee
09August
2007
Don't worry,
we're still in love
and she's still
in Chicago.

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

1 posted 2007-08-09 07:37 AM

ah...yeah that long distance stuff aches~

all the best~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2007-08-10 05:07 PM

Yes belle, at times it does ache...James

WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

3 posted 2007-08-10 11:25 PM

I can really feel the emotion in this fine write!!!!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2007-08-10 11:53 PM

James -- So much emotion expressed in so few words!

...jo

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

5 posted 2007-08-12 06:29 PM

James

I like this - mostly 'cause you are still in love. I was a bit concerned -- and I always see such beauty in your poetry.

Alison

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2007-08-12 08:27 PM

Thank you Windwalker, iliana and aziza for the wonderful responses...
Thank you for your concern aziza...I am in love...James

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