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Open Poetry #41
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EmilySian
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since 2007-08-19
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England
0 posted 2007-08-20 08:07 AM


A field stetches to the horizon,
golden and shining in the sun
limitless possibilities present themselves
limitless problems to overcome
© Copyright 2007 Emily - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2007-08-20 09:02 AM

a nice concise piece... you might want to check the spelling in the first line, but other than that I find it pleasing..and thoughtful..

well done...
TomMark
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since 2007-07-27
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2 posted 2007-08-20 11:05 AM

fine short poem.

enjoyed the read

Tomtoo
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2007-08-21 05:02 AM

Enjoyed...James
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