I Loved You More (Rondelet)

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Open Poetry #41

I Loved You More (Rondelet)

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

0 posted 2007-08-23 07:23 AM

"I Loved You More"

I loved you more.
You were the greatest part of me.
I loved you more.
I never felt such love before.
You gave your love and set me free.
Our soul as one has ceased to be.
I loved you more.

MoonShadow
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aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

1 posted 2007-08-23 11:00 AM

This made me all warm in my heart.

Very nice.
A

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2007-08-23 11:14 AM

Nice write!!
JL

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2007-08-23 11:21 PM

beautiful gentle Sir MoonShadow
and so sad

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

4 posted 2007-08-24 06:15 AM

Thank you all for your kind words and response.

MoonShadow
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