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Open Poetry #42
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
0 posted 2008-04-21 08:56 PM

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This mist
That silhouettes
The scene
Outside my window

Is like sorrow
Its shadow
Wondering why

I have no answers
There is no time
Left for us
To ponder

At least together
Hand in hand
We will
Without terror

Watch the sun
Set in the Western sky


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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-04-21 09:02 PM

John,

This is very insightful.  It's such a blessing when anyone can watch the sun go down without knowing terror.  Very well, and wisely said.

Bobby
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2008-04-22 02:56 AM

Sometimes we simply do what we must and sometimes we need to write about it.
                                     Ida

                
Seoulair
Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea
3 posted 2008-04-22 04:43 PM

Beautiful.
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