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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity 
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. Either a positive mental action Or a subtle twist of fate Is needed to change direction Before it gets to late Sliding down the spiral Long since passed the point of low Careering through oblivion Still a ways to go Once having hit the bottom It should come as no surprise That I cannot find a way out For the cobwebs on my eyes . |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Interesting Write, Even the last part!  ARCTIC WIND |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Thanks Arctic, an old one I rediscovered recently, I did consider altering it but decided to just post it as it was... |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
very good poem. Tomtoo |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
All I can think of is spiders prancing across the eyes...ewww. Nice write! |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Tom, Thanks... Amusemi, what a scary thought, it never even crossed my mind ! Thanks for reading & commenting Cheers John |
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