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Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
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0 posted 2008-01-26 05:13 PM

weird how this came to me.....

trying to think for herself
wondering aloud
if she ever did at all
making reason
out of the rhymes
knowing the wise clown
has a thousand lines
hearing the silly owl
speak through the night
waiting to find out who
put out the sunlight

~~~kingsangel~~~

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-01-28 07:59 AM

quote:
trying to think for herself

Great!

And the beginning in this little jewel isn't the only message that comes through to me.

Well done.

love
Margherita

ps of course I don't think the owl is silly, but sometimes even smart minds are in strange disguise ...

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
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2 posted 2008-01-28 10:06 AM

Hmmm. Now the owl's got me ta thinkin' ~ Exactly 'Hoo' did "put out the sunlight?"

Love, Rhyme, & Reason,

EA

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

3 posted 2008-01-28 12:37 PM

Thank you both for your comments....we all know though that the sunshine is never put out for good....YAH for that....

~~~kingsangel~~~

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
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4 posted 2008-01-28 03:54 PM

love this one. very good.

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