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Open Poetry #42
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lost-in-a-mind-of-dreams
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since 2008-05-24
Posts 35
0 posted 2008-06-10 09:04 PM

/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/
the shinning sun
hangs above
keeping us warm
and happy

yet then the moon
comes
and devours
us whole
leaving us in our night mares
/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/


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graeshine2006
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since 2008-06-03
Posts 368
The Prairie Lands, USA
1 posted 2008-06-10 10:12 PM

Funny how people see things different... I love the moon!  But totally respect what you are saying and hope the moon holds for you, someday, what it holds for me!
hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
2 posted 2008-06-11 11:29 PM

nice write short but sweet

JJ
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