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Artic Wind
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0 posted 2008-02-09 04:46 PM

Dripping Icicles (Haiku)

Dripping icicles
melting from a warm spring thaw
with change of season

*-*-*

Green buds are blooming
on the grey, weathered branches
Spring will soon be sprung

*-*-*

ARCTIC WIND

[This message has been edited by Artic Wind (02-09-2008 07:44 PM).]

simon
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1 posted 2008-02-09 04:57 PM

great...!

Margherita
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2 posted 2008-02-09 05:12 PM

So lovely, dear Arctic Wind!
Today I felt the first touch of Spring ....

love
Margherita

TomMark
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3 posted 2008-02-09 05:13 PM

good!!!

secondhanddreampoet
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4 posted 2008-02-09 06:28 PM

very fine!

applause!!

ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2008-02-09 06:48 PM

Enjoyed!

Bobby Jordan
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6 posted 2008-02-09 07:09 PM

Artic Wind,

This is a good poem, and almost a classic Haiku. I’d throw an “a” between “from” and “warm” in the first one.

Bobby

Alison

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7 posted 2008-02-09 09:21 PM

Lovely, AW

effjayel
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8 posted 2008-02-10 08:28 AM

Looks like that 'Ol Arctic Wind is blowing warmer now & thawing the frozen water !
Well done AW, enjoyed greatly.....

John

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2008-02-10 08:39 AM

aw...enjoyed your ku' here..well done

Artic Wind
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10 posted 2008-02-10 02:29 PM

Simon-

Thanks for thinking its GREAT!

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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11 posted 2008-02-10 02:30 PM

Margherita-

Thank you!

Glad you liked it!

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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12 posted 2008-02-10 02:30 PM

TomMark-

Thanks!

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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13 posted 2008-02-10 02:30 PM

SHDP-

Thank you!

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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14 posted 2008-02-10 02:31 PM

ThisDiamond-

Thank you

Diamond!

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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15 posted 2008-02-10 02:32 PM

BobbyJordan-

Thanks!

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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16 posted 2008-02-10 02:32 PM

Alison-

Thank you!

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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17 posted 2008-02-10 02:32 PM

Effjayel-

Thanks

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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18 posted 2008-02-10 02:33 PM

DarkStranger-

Thanks dark!

ARCTIC WIND

JamesMichael
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19 posted 2008-02-10 04:52 PM

Nice writing...my girlfriend in Chicago would like to see some of that thaw...James

Paul Wilson

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20 posted 2008-02-10 05:33 PM

Artic Wind...Great write. Come on Spring...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

passing shadows
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21 posted 2008-02-10 05:40 PM

I can't wait for Spring!

nice write!

Midnitesun

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22 posted 2008-02-10 05:47 PM

Bravo! a fine presentation!

Artic Wind
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23 posted 2008-02-10 05:47 PM

JamesMichael-

Thanks, I can't wait to spring comes

When the day comes, I will

throw

a party! lol

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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24 posted 2008-02-10 05:48 PM

Paul W-

Thank you!

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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25 posted 2008-02-10 05:49 PM

Passing Shadows-

Thanks

I cant wait for Spring too!

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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26 posted 2008-02-10 05:50 PM

Midnitesun-

Thanks!

LindsayP
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27 posted 2008-02-10 07:35 PM

Spring is my favourite season and you give us a first taste of it here. Well done.

Lindsay

Artic Wind
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28 posted 2008-02-10 09:56 PM

Linsday-

I love Spring Too!

I like Winter than spring, then summer, and then last but not least fall lol

Thanks

ARCTIC WIND

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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29 posted 2008-02-14 05:47 AM

wonderful, wonderful Arctic! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Earth Angel
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30 posted 2008-02-14 03:20 PM

AW, you write haiku with the best of the poets!! I thoroughly enjoyed your pennings of this Japanese poetic form!

You have brought spring a little bit closer for me! I am full of anticipation for the spring thaw to begin up here in the Great White North!

Love 'n 'springy' hugs,

EA
p.s. Happy Valentine's Day!

Artic Wind
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31 posted 2008-02-14 03:20 PM

RDB-

Thank you

Glad you Enjoyed it!

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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32 posted 2008-02-14 03:28 PM

EA-

Thank you!

ARCTIC WIND

Earth Angel
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33 posted 2008-02-16 06:57 PM

AW, I enjoyed your haiku so very much, that I have come back for seconds!

EA

Artic Wind
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34 posted 2008-02-16 07:14 PM

EA-

THANKS!

ARCTIC WIND

LindsayP
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35 posted 2008-02-16 07:34 PM

I nearly missed this one Arctic Wind,

Great post

Lindsay

Artic Wind
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36 posted 2008-02-16 07:42 PM

Lindsay-

Thank you!

ARCTIC WIND

A Romantic Heart
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37 posted 2008-02-16 08:08 PM

ah yes weare on the same page....newness, spring, new everything

Artic Wind
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38 posted 2008-02-16 08:11 PM

ARH-

Thank you!

I love spring Myself too!

ARCTIC WIND

Charisma

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39 posted 2008-02-17 03:37 PM

Very nice Haikus

Charisma

Artic Wind
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40 posted 2008-02-17 04:42 PM

Charisma-

Thanks!

ARCTIC WIND

LindsayP
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41 posted 2008-02-17 09:59 PM

Arctic Wind, I nearly missed this one, you

paint a beautiful picture of the coming

Spring. great picture, great verse.Take care

Lindsay

Artic Wind
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42 posted 2008-02-18 09:12 AM

LindsayP-

Thank you soooo much

ARCTIC WIND

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