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Open Poetry #42

Winter Creek

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2008-02-14 05:48 PM

Winter Creek

a frail bridge
over the wild
winter creek

snowy woods
beyond…

delicious
reluctance!

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

1 posted 2008-02-14 05:54 PM

And a selfish stubborness to tear myself away from such a beautiful landscape you have painted in my minds eye, Thanks Bruce....it's a gem & you never cease to amaze me how you can say so much with so few words

John

"Ignorance is the Enemy...."

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

2 posted 2008-02-14 06:21 PM

beauty, beauty. I saw, I heard and I felt and I was tempted. :
Have a beautiful Valentine day, dear Bruce.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2008-02-14 07:26 PM

Secondhanddreampoet,

You have inspired me to write a white water creek poem. This is very nice.

Bobby

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2008-02-14 07:37 PM

Nothing frail about your imaging abilities!
Now I can also anticipate Bobby's water write!

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2008-02-14 09:12 PM

"A frail bridge over a wild winter creek"
A forever picture.
Ida

Bob K
Member Elite

since 2007-11-03

Posts 4208

6 posted 2008-02-14 09:30 PM

This was very alive; I felt cautious, as though I might leave tracks in your snow. Nobody seemed to have breathed that air before. Thank you for making that day. This is nobody's secondhand dream. Bob K.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2008-03-08 05:50 PM

Nice...James

ArtSolstice
Member

since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

8 posted 2008-03-08 05:57 PM

What a pleasure to see this again, and somehow I missed replying to it when it was posted originally.
It's lovely !!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2008-03-09 11:17 AM

what a picture!

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