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Open Poetry #42

amnesia on the bed!

poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

0 posted 2008-02-23 08:53 AM

Amnesia arose

I never pardoned you to wake me
With a splash of grief
Thrown on my closed eyes.
Arose I found me amid wetness.
A bed of ocean,
The salt of sweat.
Awoke I ran to catch you and held.
You melted like snows.
The play of “touch me”
Ended into dark amnesia,
Awoke I returned
To bed and waited…

clever talks delay friendship!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-02-23 09:04 AM

Poddar, this is so intense, it takes the reader in. Sometimes amnesia brings such delight.
Oh, I love your picture and that gaze out of the window fits the poet perfectly ... watching the skies and beyond!

love
Margherita

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

2 posted 2008-02-23 03:12 PM

very good poem and a heart sighs!, my dear friend. And the picture is wonderful!!!!it is nice to see you!!!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2008-02-23 03:38 PM

Very Intense Indeed

ARCTIC WIND

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