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Sunday Morning |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. In green shadows Of summer willows Two sparrows Hunting worms . |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Ah!!! Another satisfying exhale. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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SarBear Member
since 2003-06-05
Posts 205Massachusetts |
I enjoy this. It paints a picture in few words. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Love this beginning as well. Peaceful.  Margherita |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I'd like to press a 'season change/weather modification' button and return (or advance) to this time and place! nice succinct 'impression'! applause!! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Visually appealing in it's content. Enjoyed the lack of boundaries this one can imspire. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
John, This is very nice. Sparrows are quite the hunters. Bobby |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
My type of Sunday morning - harmony, beauty, silent support and communication - and sustenance! - Owl |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I wasn't referring to owls eating sparrows! I meant sparrows eating worms. - Owl |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
you've painted a lovely picture of the solemnity of nature, coupled with the natural order of things...all in such few words...nicely done |
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