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Open Poetry #43

Time Walking

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

0 posted 2008-09-21 06:26 PM

Time walking
through dreams
and memories,
over graves.
Time walking
through a meadow
of stars
to the space
between lives
and finally returning...
to the illusion.

Ida Werrett

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

1 posted 2008-09-21 07:08 PM

grand-fine imagery!:

"Time walking
through a meadow
of stars
to the space
between lives
and finally returning...
to the illusion."

serious applause for this 'penning'!

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2008-09-21 07:08 PM

Yo dear Ida,

This is very good. I still don't walk over graves. I never could catch on to that. I always walk around them.

Bobby

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2008-09-22 02:05 AM

Ida,

I always am happy that I stopped to read your poems. I like this one a lot.

Alison

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

4 posted 2008-09-22 12:17 PM

I love this, Ida - the reality of creative imagination - and the illusion of life. Bobby, I too, do.

- Owl

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

5 posted 2008-09-22 03:30 PM

Wonderful write!

Eric

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