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Open Poetry #43

Impromptu

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2008-10-09 07:41 PM

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And she said
What are you
Doing tonight

And I said
Thinking
To myself
Not you

And walked away

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Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2008-10-09 10:59 PM

John~
Ouch .. that sure ended that chance at a conversation~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2008-10-13 06:16 PM

lol WOW! thats, okay, a little... harsh?? lol Well there must be a story behind it!

ARCTIC WIND

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2008-10-13 08:23 PM

Yo John,

Now is that any way to treat a lady?

Bobby

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2008-10-14 12:58 PM

interesting.

yann

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

5 posted 2008-10-14 03:20 PM

I'm confused, your line:
"And I said Thinking To myself Not you", Did you think to yourself, "not you" and walked, DId you say: "Not you", or did you actually say: "Thinking to myself, Not you", then walked. Just funnin you.
Either way, I know what you mean.
Some times it just isn't worth the trouble.
Walk away.

The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2008-10-15 02:43 AM

I like this...James

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