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Easter Island |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Slowly Silently Through still air The yellow leaves Come down One By one And the sun’s Light sparkles On the ripples Of a little stream Should the sky Go gray Darkened again By Mary Magdalene Let the rain fall On dead stone . |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
that last couplet is a thinker--love the spiritual nuances of this write...how ever you may have meant them, I like the way these words spoke to me |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thanks Steve, John . |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write!  ARCTIC WIND |
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