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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan 
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Fragile, calloused hands tremble at your tender touch startled from their silent melancholy |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear The Shadow in Blue, This very interesting poem has a number of possible interpretations. That makes it not only a surprise, but a mystery. Love Bobby |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
That was my goal Bobby. Art imitates life. Thanks for reading. J. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
The Shadow in Blue - I believe this is the first writing of yours I've read, waiting for more, nice write... BC |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
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Pantheress Member
since 2008-11-02
Posts 215Queensland, Australia |
Short on words, powerful on effect and response, wonderful, thanks for sharing.. |
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