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Open Poetry #43

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brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

0 posted 2008-11-25 02:44 AM

I feel a curl of hands
          coming on

                  a walk
      on a block
of feetwood
                a death of
           distraction
a
no   longer
          unfocusedment
     a forced----meat
of nonloafment

                  oh
bring it on!

                    I tire of
Unemployment
       Raise my mind to the
highest Numbing

             it is worth
                    the Dollar
      to feed
my 39th
        dumbing

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2008-11-25 06:22 AM

Raise my mind to the
highest Numbing

awww, I hope things get better...enjoyed your play on words

M

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2008-11-25 12:51 PM

I enjoyed your clever poem. I rrrrrrrrrreally hope that you get a job soon.

- Owl

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2008-11-26 02:15 AM

It's very Irish, how you stack your words of stone. But I hear the voice of the Ameriman screaming, the mortar that holds it all together--damn baby.

You are so........Joycean.

and Bri-man too.

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