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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2008-07-28 03:09 PM

You whisper through my
Veins…almost
Soundless.
But I listen,
And respond…my pulse beating
Echoes only you can hear.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-07-28 05:18 PM

A wonderful effect of merging souls ... you captured it masterfully, dear Eric!

Echoes travel far!

Margherita

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

2 posted 2008-07-29 12:07 PM

This kind of seizes you right in the chest.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`·

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

3 posted 2008-07-29 12:12 PM

Your writing takes my breath away every time, Eric! I love how you fill small space with big imagery.

~miscellanea~

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

4 posted 2008-07-29 11:43 AM

nice connection!

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

5 posted 2008-07-29 01:50 PM

Listening is an art but even more so when listening with the heart because it enables such a meaningful response. Wonderful write, Eric!

Helen

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

6 posted 2008-07-29 08:50 PM

I love echoes, but I gues every one here should know that.

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 2008-07-29 11:33 PM

I can hear the Echoes your poem has left!

ARCTIC WIND

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2008-07-29 11:39 PM

wow

you always seem to leave me with that one word

allmo
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since 2008-09-06

Posts 6
California, USA

9 posted 2008-09-06 06:24 AM

very nice

allmo

TheAnonDavid
Member

since 2008-08-28

Posts 237
UK

10 posted 2008-09-06 07:57 AM

Sometimes a writer can take whole chapters to express one thought. You manage it in a few words.

Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
Dylan Thomas

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

11 posted 2008-09-07 02:09 PM

One perfect thought, echoes.

wwzwlmd8
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since 2006-09-23

Posts 96
San Diego,CA

12 posted 2008-09-07 02:50 PM

i love this it was really good

~Indya

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

13 posted 2008-09-07 06:41 PM

sigh

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

14 posted 2008-09-07 07:49 PM

You write the best kind of poems, Eric. Short on words, long on meaning.
Ida

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

15 posted 2008-09-07 09:44 PM

Oh, my. *S* Romance at its best! *S*

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